I wish I could give this more stars. Well written and literate, creepy at times, but there was just no payoff for me. We finally knew what had happened, then there was the, well you know what, I won't spoil it, a good build up. Then, it was kind of: what, that's it? Reminded me of a cross between the Yellow Wallpaper and The Shining. It must have been a pretty good read because I'm a slow reader and I pretty much blew through it.Maybe I'll write more later, but this is my first impression.